Today we where doing a quick write about the koru in this piece of writing we had to describe the koru how it looks and just over all create a good piece of writing.
I found it easy to find the image in the background and change my slide to how I wanted it to look.
I found it hard to think of how to describe the koru because there are only so many ways to describe a koru because of the limited things to describe but in the end I got there.
I really enjoyed decorating the the slides to how I'd like them and challenging myself to write more even though it's clear I didn't because of my limited imagination.
Next time I need to work harder and get more similes in and maybe even some personification in my writing to make it more interesting to read.
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